tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4347209844137207576.post2085831021852355..comments2022-08-08T23:25:01.434-07:00Comments on Art + Shit by Sarah Schmidt: Homework #5: Dancing DancersAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02399002296807059124noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4347209844137207576.post-12648641977939198242012-11-05T20:48:48.364-08:002012-11-05T20:48:48.364-08:00Sarah,On the whole, many of these are really stron...Sarah,<br>On the whole, many of these are really strong.<br>The entire page of the Native-dressed dancer is a keeper, as is the page above it. Each page has some really strong points. I would suggest to control WHERE the darker lines are being placed - not just to go over a "mistake," but to consciously dictate overlap - because a lot of these have really great overlap.<br>Well done.Patrick Kenneyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00790552155569847027noreply@blogger.com